Although I am shocking poetry my Daughter Beth is very clever and often sits and writes songs, story and poetry so this week Beth (aged 11) has asked if she could share one of her recent poems on my blog, so if your sitting comfortably we will begin:
She met a boy with eyes of blue
He was so good looking too
A handsome boy called Marty
To prove to him that she did care
She took him out to see a scare
Some buttery popcorn, they did share
Layla and her Marty
This week Beth and I are linking up for the lovely Vicky for her linky Prose for Thought, why not pop over and check out the others posts too HERE
What a very clever girl Beth is, this is fab. She is obviously someone who can express herself creatively. With reference to your comment on my post, if this isn’t one of her best then I’m looking forward to seeing what else she can do. Thank you for linking up lovely ladies xx
Thanks Vicky, her imagination is amazing!! she is already working on some new ones! Thanks for letting us link up
Aww that’s a lovely poem, she is very talented xx
far more talented than I am! thanks for stopping by
Fab! So lovely that Beth already loves to write! Like mother like daughter… x
Thanks, she is far better than me!! .. watch out blog here Beth comes! thanks for popping by
Love it – a kind of very direct, open style…
thats Beth to a T!! lol thanks for popping over
And now the years have rolled along;
Her love for him is ever strong -
Layla, for her Marty.
He, now full-grown, too, loves her dear
But, to declare it, fills with fear -
SHE’LL ‘pop the question’ next leap year!
Layla, to her Marty.
(Sorry – couldn’t resist…)
thats bloody fantastic, she is watching a film in bed now but i will read her your next bit and i am sure she will love it!
nice poem, she is good with words, and she is also a very beautiful young lady
love the words, love the picture. x
I’ve only just got my internet back again!! Jaime she is so so beautiful, I can’t help but smile when I look at her face. Fantastic poem too Beth, you are a very talented young lady, to write like that at 11 is amazing x
Glad you have your internet back on!! She is so talented i am not sure where she gets it from x
Very talented young lady you have there, excellent poem.
Thanks, she certainly has more talent than me!
Love it, she has a lovely way with words
Gorgeous girl too x
Thank you, she is currently working on this weeks already